I particularly like:
andMy body
It tries to steal me
Away in the night, further
than I want to go
And My Body, in particular, reminded me of the feel of some of the poems Robert BlyFilled to my wings
Filled to my wings
the earthen weight hanging in
my hummingbird core
included in his book News of the Universe: Poems of Twofold Consciousness. So much so, that I cracked open the book, and was delighted to rediscover and reacquaint myself with some friends I haven't seen in a long while.
So, from News of the Universe, three poems that feel like those of Miss Me's:
Sometimes
Sometimes, when a bird cries out,
Or the wind sweeps through a tree,
Or a dog howls in a far off farm,
I hold still and listen a long time.
My soul turns and goes back to the place
Where, a thousand forgotten years ago,
The bird and the blowing wind
Were like me, and were my brothers.
My soul turns into a tree,
And an animal, and a cloud bank.
Then changed and odd it comes home
And asks me questions.
What should I reply (p86)?Hermann Hesse (translated by Robert Bly)
Differences
coughing up blood
before the sun rose.
i spit out the wind
and all turns into
what might be expected
on a rainy day. sleep.
i dreamed of an animal
with its teeth shining
so greatly . . .
and we have heard from
each other once or twice.
we seek to see who is god (p200).Ray Young Bear
and:
The Great Sea
The great sea
Has sent me adrift,
It moves me as the weed in a great river,
Earth and the great weather move me,
Have carried me away,
And move my inward parts with joy (p257).Eskimo Shaman Woman quoted by Rasmussen
I Love these. Differences gives me the greatest trouble, not having sensed yet what it contains. The other two...perfectly related. He senses. He pictures. He brings the image to be a part of him. I feel similarly. Thank you for sharing these, as well as my blog, it's refreshing to have feedback and perhaps extra views ;) (May I ask, what is Eskimo Shaman Woman?)
ReplyDeleteMM, I linked 'Differences' to your writing (prose & poetry) because it is speaking from the body out into the spirit, which your writing often does.
ReplyDelete"Eskimo Shaman Woman" was an Inuit shaman from whom the explorer Knud Rasmussen recorded story/myth/history. I have no idea if Rasmussen recorded her name or not.